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A second before immortality

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First we come to the world, just like little fellas, we learn how to crawl, how to walk, and how to run. We get bonds with our first cirlcle, our family, and they show us the beauty part of the life. We can think a lot of things in that moment, just cause we are children, and our imagination take us to a great and big castle, or with the mighty space.

Our adolescence come, and we start to get bonds with girls or boys, or maybe both, who knows; we learn mathematics, history, biology, etc. and we grow up. Our life cross through a lot of senses, moments, places, feelings, PROBLEMS, tragedies, and other stuff, but we learn how to fell and get up at the time, just before we break our bones. But finally, we get a job, a family, a boss, partners, teamates, friends, and a lot of knowledge. Some of us become good people, other ones no, some of us are just a lot of useless guys, other ones save lifes.

Now, at this moment,  u're married, u have 2 sons, and 1 little daughter, ur life is complete, u just have to repeat the same cirlce, the one ur parents repeated on u, just that.......

So......why am I telling this?............. cause a bullet has passed through my brain, other through my lung, and other  one through my heart, and this thoughts just crossed my mind in that peacefull moment, in that second before the immortality.

(reflexion)*think how easily a life can be finished with a little piece of plumb, say no to violence and live a good life
well, I have been thinking in this topic a lot of time, I get sick when I hear and see al the bastards that kill and torture, ·$&$·/%·$/ with them
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aryneko-chan's avatar
such a beauty feeling ... don't give up and keep efforting!!